The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.
The bar graph
display
the numbers of people who have part-time jobs in countries that make up the United Change the verb form
displays
Kingdoms
, Fix the agreement mistake
Kingdom
bothe
in 1980 and 2010.
Correct your spelling
both
Overall
, they has
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have
Correct article usage
a genally
genally
small increase in part-time Correct your spelling
generally
workers
from 1980 to 2010, except for the
Northern Correct article usage
apply
Iraland
.
In 1980, Wales Correct your spelling
Ireland
has
the most part-time Wrong verb form
had
workers
up to slightly over 30%, followed by England, which has
almost 25% of Wrong verb form
had
works
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workers
While
the other two countries, Northern Ireland and Scotland has
the smallest percentage of part-time Wrong verb form
had
workers
, with just 15% and over 10% respectively.
On the other hand
, in 2010, England, Scotland , and Wales saw an increase in the percentage of people working part time
. In England, the percentage rose to above 30% and in Wales Add a hyphen
part-time
is
Correct your spelling
it
increasing
to just over 35%. In Scotland, it rose Wrong verb form
increased
doulblle
from the past to approximately 20%. Correct your spelling
double
Whereas
, the part-time workers
in the Norther
Ireland Correct your spelling
Northern
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have
has
decrease Add the particle
has to
smaller
amount to Add an article
the smaller
nealy
13%.Correct your spelling
nearly
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