The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011.

The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011.
The table shows data about the changes in the number of residents cycling to
work
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during ten years in twelve different areas of the UK. The table compares the twelve areas by their percentage of change
according to
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their population from 2001 to 2011. Bigger regions tend to embrace cycling rather than smaller ones. The inner London area is the
is the
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one with the most significant changes throughout the decade. With about 43.494 persons cycling to
work
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in 2001 to 106,219, representing an evolution of 144 %. Again, in Bristol, an augmentation of 94% was detected, starting at 8108 cyclists in 2001 which means it is
third
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biggest region out of the others.
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. Manchester is the fourth biggest region with about 4610 cyclists in 2001 to 8426 in 2011.
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,
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its smaller size, the augmentation is slightly smaller than the previous one, with an 83% evolution.
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, the smaller the zone, the
less
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fewer
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people seem to get to
work
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by bicycle. Liverpool
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only had 2686 inhabitants that used their bicycle to get to
work
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in 2001, and about 3970 in 2011, a mere 48% increase.
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, it is in outer London that the number of inhabitants
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the less, and despite being the second biggest zone, its size exceeds every other
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, so it is proportionally the section with the lowest progression out of all with
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% increase starting at 33836 citizens.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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