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The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the classification of various income groups in
cities
 and regional centres of Australia.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 most
people
 in the
cities
 of Australia are categorized in the middle-income class,
while
 the lower middle-income
group
 has the highest population in regional centres areas.
To begin
 with, the
cities
 in Australia are mostly dominated by
people
 who generate salaries in the range of $70,000-$120,000, which accounted for 35%.
Additionally
, the second highest income level is the lower-middle
group
, which is only 5% below the middle salary
group
. It is
also
 shown that locals who make money in the range of $120,000 or more are 20% in proportion, which does not have a huge gap compared to the other two mentioned groups.
However
, there is a big difference in the low-income
group
, which only accounted for less than 15%, becoming the lowest population in Australian
cities
.
On the other hand
, the regional centres are mostly dominated by
people
 who only can gain $40,000 - $70,000 per year (34%), followed by the middle earnings category with approximately 26%. In
this
 area, the low-income category
also
 shares a similar portion with approximately 23% of
people
.
On the contrary
, only 15% of citizens in
this
 region belong to the high-level income
group
.
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