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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the data about the length of life of Iceland's society between 1990 and 2020.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the majority of Iceland's population was classified in the 25 -
54
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54-year-old
years
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 old
group
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,
while
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 the 55-64
category
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 became the
group
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 with the least number of people.
To begin
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 with, the 25 -
54
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54-year-old
years
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 old
group
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 became the biggest population compared to the others and had a gradual increase across the
years
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, reaching its peak in 2020 by approximately 50%.
Additionally
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, the second highest position belonged to the infant and adolescent
category
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 (0-14
years
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 old) yet it had a negative trend until the end of the period, which only accounted for around 18% in 2020.
Likewise
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, the teenagers and young adults
group
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 (15-24)
also
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 shared a similar trend pattern with the infant and adolescent
category
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, and it hit the point of 8% in the finished period.
On the contrary
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, the age of 55-64
category
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 only had a diminutive proportion compared to the others, and always accounted for below 15%, becoming the
group
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 with the lowest number of citizens.
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, a small percentage of people aged 65 and over can be seen if compared to the total population.
However
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, it had a slightly bigger percentage in 2020 compared to the 55-64
category
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, with around 15% of people.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, group, category with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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