The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information regarding the portion of humans who were born in three different
areas
. Cities
, Towns, and Rural areas
. In the country of Australia
this
report for the years 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, in the year 1995 people who were born outside Australia
experienced a high rate in the Cities
while
the least portion were in the Towns. In contrast
, those born in Australia
are the same in aspects of the areas
. In addition
, in the year 2010, Rural areas
had a dramatic decline for people born outside Australia
while
those born In Australia
remained the same for Towns and Rural areas
.
Despite this
, Cities
had a rate of 60 percent
outside Change the spelling
per cent
Australia
whereas
in Australia
increased by 10 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
hence
, Rural areas
in Australia
had 30 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
while
outside Australia
was 40 percent
. As we can see in the year 2010 both categories who were born in Town and rural Change the spelling
per cent
areas
were down sharply while
those who were born in the Cities
remain
stable inside and outside.Wrong verb form
remained
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