The line graph compares the number of cars stolen for every 1000 vehicles in four countries from 1990 to 1999.
The line graph illustrates the total of car theft
cases
for every 1000 automobiles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Overall
, it is clear that
Great Britain had the highest statistic of stolen cars, while
Canada became the country with the lowest number of car thefts phenomenon.
To begin
with, the majority of car theft cases
happened in Great Britain, which accounted for over 15% over the years. There was a fluctuation in its trend with a starting point at approximately 18% in 1990, and it reached its peak at 20% in 1992 and 1996, yet it decreased to around 17% in 1999. Additionally
, there were also
several cases
in Sweden with a gradual increase in its rate over the years. Began at only 6% in 1990, its trend climbed up and reached the apogee at
15% in the finished period.
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of
On the contrary
, France
and Canada experienced only small tragedies compared to Great Britain and Sweden. In France
, it can be seen that the trend was quite unchanged and stayed at 7-9%. Similarly
, Canada also
shared a similar pattern with France
, yet it had a slightly lower sum of cases
compared to France
between 1991 - 1998. However
, it rose steadily and hit the same point as France
at around 6% in 1999.Submitted by floriehendr on
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