The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how tehy rated hotel's customer service.
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The pie charts give information about the results of the survey of tourists regarding their impression towards the Parkway Hotel's customer aid in 2005 and 2010.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the majority of people only chose the satisfactory rate to assess the customer work in 2005,
whereas
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most of the visitors had a better experience and chose a good category for final
judgement
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in 2010.
To begin
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with, the majority of tourists in 2005 were satisfied with the service provided by the hotel, which accounted for 45%, remaining the highest percentage compared to the other categories.
However
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, there were 15-21% of people who gave poor and very poor judgement, which is quite significant in terms of evaluation.
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, only 5% of people considered the hotel service as excellent in the survey during
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period.
On the contrary
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, there was a huge improvement in terms of the quality of the customer assistance. In 2010, almost 40% of individuals had a good impression of their assistance.
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, there was a dramatic increase in the excellent category, which is quintupled compared to 2005.
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, it can be seen that there was a drop in poor and very poor categories, which only accounted for less than a fifth.
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