The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar graph provides information about
people
's habits and preferences for drinking warm beverages such
as tea
and coffee
. The data compares figures about the percentages of people
in five different cities in Australia
.
Overall
, among cities in Australia
, most individuals preferred to go to a coffee
shop to purchase tea
and coffee
. It can also
be noted that people
who want instant
coffee
are their least favourite.
In detail,visiting in
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apply
coffee
shop to have tea
and coffee
has the highest proportion of people
in Melbourne
and Brisbanes
, accounting for approximately 64% and 63%, respectively. Followed by Sydney at roughly 62%. Hobart has almost 55%. Correct your spelling
Brisbane
Whereas
, in Adelaide, it has the lowest percentage of people
going the
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to the
coffee
shop at 55%.
A different pattern can be seen among the five places in Australia
where most of them like instant
coffee
. Hobart has the highest proportion of individuals drinking instant
coffee
, at around 54%. While
almost 53% of Brisbanens drink hot instant
coffee
or tea
. It is also
clear that people
in Adelaide are into instant
coffee
or tea
at exactly 50%, followed by Melbourne
at around 48%. Sydney has the lowest figure, at a little over 45%, drinking warm beverages.
An opposite pattern can be seen among people
who prefer to drink fresh coffee
or tea
in five places in Australia
in the last
four weeks. Melbourne
has the highest percentage, at roughly 42%. Followed next in Sydney at exactly 40%. Whereas
in Melbourne
and Brisbane, the rate of people
drinking fresh tea
or coffee
is 35% each. It is also
documented that Hobart has the slowest number of people
, at 38%, who prefer fresh coffee
and tea
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