Some people consider prices as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree

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Over the
last
two or three decades,
product's
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the product's
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price
has increased rapidly as compared to the past.
However
, Some think that
product's
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the product's
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cost is the utmost important to think about when
buy
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buying
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things
. I partially agree with
this
statement and
this
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
with,
price
is the deciding factor when
people
purchase
things
because all
people
are not financially
stae
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safe
to buy
things
without
consider
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considering
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money.
Additionally
, some products have minimum features but the
price
is higher
while
people
think bout
this
product
cost is worthy of the features and models.
For example
, a recent report
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done by the Times of India said that more than 80% of
the
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folks
are considered
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consider
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price
before buying products.
In addition
, buying
things
within a budget is the most important of many
individuals
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individuals'
individual's
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thought
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thoughts
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,
hence
, they consider
price
before buying
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
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.
Nevertheless
,
price
is not
only
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the only
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to be considered
that
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before purchasing
things
, there are some other factors
also
.
Quality
of the
service
and
product
are the most important than
price
because these
provides
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provide
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more satisfaction and
long
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are long
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lasting.
Furyhermore
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Furthermore
, a good
service
or
product
price
is expensive
while
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people
do not think about the
price
,
in contrast
, they should consider the
quality
of the
service
and
product
.
For instance
, medical expenses are
most
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more
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expensive than other expenses but the
quality
of the treatment can give long years of guarantee.
Therefore
,
quality
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the quality
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of the
service
and
product
also
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is also
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to be considered when buying
things
.
To conclude
, all
the
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individuals are not
same
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the same
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financial status, so, many public look
on
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at
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their
price
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prices
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first when buying
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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.
Although
,
quality
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the quality
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of the
service
product
provides
long lasting
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long-lasting
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and
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apply
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satisfaction, so,
people
should
also
consider
this
.
Then
, I partially agree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details.
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