The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give information about the average Australian household's
energy
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consumption and how much greenhouse gas
emissions
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are generated.
Overall
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, heating purposes are the highest number of
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use
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and they contribute to the biggest
emissions
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,
while
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the lowest one is the cooling category.
To begin
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with, heating and water heating in Australian families make up 72% of
energy
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use
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, 42% and 30% in turn , making them the biggest amount of
energy
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use
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. These
also
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contribute to the largest gas
emissions
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generated which account for almost half of total
emissions
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at 15% for heating and 32% for water heating. Meanwhile, other appliances are the third biggest
energy
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use
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at 15% which produces the second highest emission at 28%, which is 13% higher than heating
emissions
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. Unlike others, the
energy
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used in cooling and lighting is only below 10% of
energy
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use
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and
emissions
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produced.
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, refrigeration uses 7% of
energy
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, but it generates higher
emissions
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at 14%, twice higher than its used
energy
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, emissions, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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