The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts give information about the average Australian household's
energy
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emissions
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Overall
, heating purposes are the highest number of Linking Words
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use
and they contribute to the biggest Use synonyms
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the lowest one is the cooling category.
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To begin
with, heating and water heating in Australian families make up 72% of Linking Words
energy
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use
, 42% and 30% in turn , making them the biggest amount of Use synonyms
energy
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use
. These Use synonyms
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contribute to the largest gas Linking Words
emissions
generated which account for almost half of total Use synonyms
emissions
at 15% for heating and 32% for water heating.
Meanwhile, other appliances are the third biggest Use synonyms
energy
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use
at 15% which produces the second highest emission at 28%, which is 13% higher than heating Use synonyms
emissions
. Unlike others, the Use synonyms
energy
used in cooling and lighting is only below 10% of Use synonyms
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use
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However
, refrigeration uses 7% of Linking Words
energy
, but it generates higher Use synonyms
emissions
at 14%, twice higher than its used Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, emissions, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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