The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK
A glance at a line graph provided reveals the
amount
of atmospheric
pollutants
discharged from three distinctive sources namely industry, transport,
households
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and households
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, measured in tonnes, from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, there was a recessive growth pattern witnessed in the data of air
pollutants
released from industry and household and the reverse was true for the others. In terms of
total
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the total
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amount
of emitted atmospheric
pollutants
,
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starting
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from exactly 7 in 1990, it went down rapidly and continuously to over 3 which halved the initial point after 15 years. With respect to
emission
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emissions
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from industry, though it was the highest released
amount
among all at about 5,5 in 1990, it plunged consistently into correctly in 2005. Regarding the
amount
of transport’s exhausted fumes and those of households, despite having the same starting points at approximately 1, they differed from their trend.
While
the former hiked slightly and steadily to accurately 1, the latter went down slowly and continuously to its trough where almost no responses detected any emergence of air
pollutants
in the chart.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, pollutants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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