People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What do you think is the cause of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Over the

last

two or three decades, people's safety has decreased more tremendously than ever before. These days, people feel unsafe when they

are

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go out or at

home

due to

increasing the rate of

crime

by

criminals

. It can be solved

that

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apply

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by the strict rules that have to

implement

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be implemented

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against the

crime

by the government.

This

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

To begin

with, these days, the individual feels unsafe at

home

or outside because

crime

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the crime

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ratio is increased day-to-day across the world.

Criminals

are

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not

worked

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work

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but they need money to fulfil their needs and

wands

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wanders

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in everyday

while

they do

crime

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criminal

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activities to satisfy their livelihood with other's money and

assest

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assets

asset

assist

.

For example

,

offender's

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offenders

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target only

who

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those who

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lives

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live

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alone at

home

, especially elders and

who

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those who

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goes

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go

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alone outside

while

criminals

do robbery

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rob

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,

consequently

, unsafetyness is raised among the populace.

However

, the government should

be implemented

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implement

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a strict rules

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strict rules

a strict rule

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against these kinds of

criminals

by

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so

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strict rules which

criminals

will not become

reoffenders

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offenders

. Some kind of offenders

consently

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consistently

do

crime

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criminal

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activities to

robber

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rob

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other's

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other of

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money,

jewel

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jewels

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and

assest

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assets

,

this

kind of criminal should be punished

by

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apply

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severely namely capital

punishment

while

people

have

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are

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more afraid to do any misleading activities.

For instance

, deadly

punishment

will reduce the

crime

rate

as well as

the

criminals

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crime

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ratio.

Therefore

, the

authority

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authorities

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should give severe punishments to offenders in order

to

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for

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the populace can go outside without

fears

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fear

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.

To conclude

, increasing the rate of crimes and

criminals

are the main causes for the population

do

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not

feel

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to feel

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.safe at

home

or when they

out

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are out

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.

Although

, capital

punishment

and severe

punishment

should be implemented against the

law breaker

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lawbreaker

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by the authorities in order to

sove

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solve

save

this

problem.