You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam

dear sir/madam.

Firstly

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want

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introduce myself before

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apply to join

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volunteer. My name is Dewi Saputri,

usually

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people call me Dewi. I am 22 years old, and now

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am in

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3rd year

studying

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of studying

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university

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my major is

english

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education.

According

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the announcement that

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got,

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have read that your company open the

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for the volunteer about the expedition of the culture. Through

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would like to apply that

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want to join and be

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part of

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. The main

reasons

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that

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want to join

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because

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want to be a person who can spread the benefits

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peolpe

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people

around me.

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have

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many experiences

about

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voluntary, the one of

this experience

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when

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was joining

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campus

mengajar

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. I joined

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mengajar

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for 4 months

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the location is far from my domicile. Since

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joined,

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have made many things which can

gave

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positive

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impact

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people around me. These impacts

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me and my team helped students to increase their numeracy and

litercay

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literacy

knowledge, made