The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables compare five European
countries
in terms of the cost of fair sales of
coffee
and
bananas
by farmers over a period of 5
years
.
It is clear that
Switzerland
was by far the most peculiar country for the sales of both
bananas
and
coffee
in 1999. Belgium had a striking rise in the sale of
bananas
in 2004. Over 5
years
UK overtook
Switzerland
for the highest rate of sold
coffee
. In 1999,
Switzerland
was the main trader of
coffee
among European
countries
, with 3 million
of
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euros
and its figure raised twice time in 2004. What stands out is the sharp increase of selling
coffee
in the UK from 1.5
millions
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of
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euros
to 20
millions
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euros
by 2004. Belgium went up from 1 to 1.7 and the other two
countries
had a minor rise of 0.2
millions
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euro during
this
period. The vending of
bananas
in two European
countries
, Sweden and Denmark dramatically decreased from 1.8 and 2 to 1 and 0.9
millions
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euros
respectively.
By contrast
,
UK
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and Belgium saw a substantial upward at about six times in the early
years
of the 20th century. By far the most dramatic progress in the trading of
bananas
was for
Switzerland
which put up to 47
millions
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euros
after five
years
.
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