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The given graph shows the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990.

The given graph shows the main sources of energy for USA in 1980 and 1990.
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The two pie charts give information about the main sources of energy for the USA during the decade starting from 1980.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 at the beginning of the period, nuclear power was the least figure,
while
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 oil was a significant segment.
Subsequently
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,
at the end
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 of the interval coal became the largest number and the lowest source of energy was hydroelectric power. The energy produced by oil comprised 42% in the first year and
this
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 showed a slight decrease of 9% to 33% in 1990.
Likewise
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, in 1980 nuclear power used 5% which rose slowly to 10% 10 years later. With regard to the remaining methods of producing stamina, there was an approximate 0% rise in manufacturing hydroelectric influence to 5%.
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 coal increased from 22% to 27 %.

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