The line graph compares the fast food consumption of teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years.

The line graph compares the fast food consumption of teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years.
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The line chart describes information about the junk food eaten by Australian teenagers throughout the period from 1975 to 2000. Units are measured in numbers of time.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the consumption of fish and chips was a dominant slash at the beginning of the period in spite of declining
at the end
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of the duration.
Furthermore
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, the eating of hamburgers was a dramatic increase over the 25 years.
Moreover
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, it is worth noting that pizza was a significant change in consumption.
In particular
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, it can be seen that
although
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fish and chips were a leader, there was witnessed a sharp fall.
Firstly
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, it reduced to roughly 80 in 1980 despite being 90 in 1985. Following that, there was a substantial decrease to 40 till 2000. Plausible as
this
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seems,
initially
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, in 1975, the eating of hamburgers represented one of the lowest points,afterwards it went up dramatically to nearly 85 in 1985.
However
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, it lost a noticeable growth and reached fractionally to 100.
Whereas
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, it took over leadership in 2000. Regarding eating pizza which saw a marked rise and climbed to around 80.
Besides
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that, it remained unchanged from 1995 to 2000.
Last
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but not least, the consumption of hamburgers jumped to second position in 2000.
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