The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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The maps depict the development of an industrial area in Norbiton city,
along with
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planned future changes
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the site.
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, it is vividly seen that the town has some transformations, which there many public facilities and housings in the future. To delve into more details, at present, the factories along the road will be demolished and replaced by some dwellers. The farmland along the river will be transformed into a long road
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a big house nearby. On the south side of
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, a shop and a medical centre will be constructed, followed by installing a playground for children between both houses and the river.
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, there will be a school to remove the factory located to the southeast of the playground.
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, the farmland along the road will be relocated to a new area to the north of the playground,
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there will be no changes for the river.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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