The table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the difference between the
number
of
exchange
students
from universities between
Europe
and
Australia
from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
, the
number
of
exchange
students
from universities in
Europe
to
Australia
rose, but the reverse shows no changes. Regarding the first table, French
students
were ranked first in terms of the
number
of
exchange
students
in
Europe
to
Australia
, at about 60 in both years. Meanwhile, Sweden and Germany underwent a skyrocket, from 32 to 42 for the former and from 27 to 63 for the latter.
By contrast
, the remaining nations' numbers saw a plummet. The
number
of
exchange
students
in the UK declined by 6 people and that for the Netherlands dropped by 10 people from 2007 to 2009. But the total
number
of
exchange
students
in
Europe
to
Australia
saw a significant climb by 40. In the same period of time, the total
number
of
exchange
students
from
Australia
to
Europe
remained intact at 152. Almost all nations experienced a drop in terms of
students
taking part in
exchange
program
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except for France and Germany. The former nation was half of the figure in the first table in 2007
,
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but
then
increased to double to 58 in 2009. The latter nation grew by 8 people after two years. The figures for Sweden, the UK, and the Netherlands were the same in the two tables and slightly decreased over the period by 6 to 14.
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