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The table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the difference between the
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 from universities between
Europe
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 and
Australia
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 from 2007 to 2009.
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, the
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 from universities in
Europe
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 to
Australia
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 rose, but the reverse shows no changes. Regarding the first table, French
students
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 were ranked first in terms of the
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 in
Europe
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 to
Australia
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, at about 60 in both years. Meanwhile, Sweden and Germany underwent a skyrocket, from 32 to 42 for the former and from 27 to 63 for the latter.
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, the remaining nations' numbers saw a plummet. The
number
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exchange
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students
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 in the UK declined by 6 people and that for the Netherlands dropped by 10 people from 2007 to 2009. But the total
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 in
Europe
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 to
Australia
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 saw a significant climb by 40. In the same period of time, the total
number
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 of
exchange
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students
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 from
Australia
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 to
Europe
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 remained intact at 152. Almost all nations experienced a drop in terms of
students
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 taking part in
exchange
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program
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 except for France and Germany. The former nation was half of the figure in the first table in 2007
,
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 increased to double to 58 in 2009. The latter nation grew by 8 people after two years. The figures for Sweden, the UK, and the Netherlands were the same in the two tables and slightly decreased over the period by 6 to 14.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, exchange, students, europe, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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