The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The Bar Chart illustrate the roughly calculated
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people rate by region and by sex for the
last
year. The Chart shows that Developed countries have a very low rate of
illiteracy
while
on the other hand
, South Asia has the most. Especially the
women
are the most uneducated. With the help of Graph, we can easily see why countries are ahead of the world because they have the lowest
illiteracy
rate and
then
the Caribbean countries came with 2nd place. in the 3rd bar we can see in East Asia females are more likely educated than males and take the 3rd place in the graph. In
4th
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spot, Sub-Saharan Africa came where the
women
are again ahead of male in education.
in 2nd
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In the second
last
bar we can see in Arab states men are behind the
women
in
illiteracy
. South Asia
come
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at the end
with the most percentage of uneducated people. The
overall
graph shows that
women
are more likely interested in getting the education and they have a lower ratio of
illiteracy
than men.
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