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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Hello Amandeep, How's it going? I hope you are doing well. Yesterday, I
receive
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 your letter you want to learn
driving
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to drive
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. It is a good decision you
take
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make
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. Driving is essential for everyone because you know we live in the GT area and if we take a bus it takes too much time. With the help of
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a car
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car
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car,
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 we can go anywhere in
mintues
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minutes
. I suggest you City driving school because
price
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the price
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 is very affordable
as well as
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 they can teach on the weekend. I
also
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 completed my training course from
same
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a same
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 driving school. I give you one tip related to your career. When you
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apply
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start learning driving always take morning classes because in the morning
time
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 there
are
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 no rush on
roads
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the roads
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 and it is easy for you to concentrate on your goal. I hope you will like my suggestion. I will be waiting for
you
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your
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 letter when you pass the driving test. Best of luck
for
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 your test. Warm Regards Manpreet

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Coherence and Cohesion
Provide a clear structure with an appropriate opening and closing. Ensure each paragraph presents a distinct idea related to the topic.
Task Achievement
Expand on the reasons why a driving licence is advantageous, and provide more specific information about the recommended driving school, such as instructors, success rate, or types of courses offered.
Task Achievement
Make sure to maintain a semi-formal tone throughout the letter, which is consistent with writing to a friend. While informal language is acceptable, the letter should still demonstrate good control of language conventions.
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