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some people believe having friends always agree is better. Others think that have friends sometimes different is good. Discuss this topic

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Some people believe that having
friends
 who always support their
opinions
 is better
nevertheless
 people
also
 think having
friends
 who sometimes have different
opinions
 from them is good. As far as I am concerned, There are no
friends
 who always agree with our
opinions
, sometimes they have different thinking with us and
as a
result
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result,
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 we will debate each other. But at the same time we can learn from our differences,
for instance
 when Our
friends
 have bad experiences about something and we have the same cases and don't really know about it, we can make decisions from our
friend''s
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friend's
friends
 experiences.
In addition
, the opposite is necessary in our life because it makes us more creative and think more about some cases to preserve our
opinions
. As a human being, it is normal when we disagree with
others
, and because of
that
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that,
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 we have experienced how to face
others
 when we on that situation.
For example
, we are on different politics, they have their own reasons and we do too but tolerance is really needed in that case, because politics will not make us separated, so it is needless to debate, that tolerance is the best solution. In conclusion, There are no people who are always the same as us
everytime
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every time
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, sometimes we will face
others
 who are opposite,
on the other
hand
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hand,
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 we can learn how to face
others
 who
arre
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are
 different
with
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apply
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. I personally think that having
friends
 who sometimes disagree with me is better because they can give me some advice or share their experiences so
i
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I
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 can make decisions by their
experienced
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experiences
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.
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