Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, advertising is the best-selling or buying tool which allows
people
to shop more if they need products
or not. Although
, many people
think that advertising distracts ordinary people
from buying unwanted products
, others may support that it is the best way to know about the latest products
which may be helpful for day-to-day life. I supported the advertisement that provides the latest features of products
and this
essay will give appropriate reasons with examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with social media through advertising, is an easy way to get to know about the product if you want to buy in the future. This
means that you can pre-plan to manage a financial situation to purchase an iPhone or laptop for business purposes. For instance
, many travellers who travel solo trips with the help of advertising before pre-planning purchase useful products
which would be helpful to have on the solo trip such
as camping kits, lights, and so on. Thus
, it is crystal clear that advertising can benefit individuals to shop right products
to improve their lives.
Moreover
, offline advertising was also
quite popular in many areas where technology had not arrived such
as big posters of brands' products
which are coming soon. Because of this
advertisement, poor people
go to the shopping centre to see if such
types of products
are worth it or not so that they can have more information to compare the products
with other brands to purchase less expense. Hence
, paper-based advertising also
more attention individuals about new arrival products
.
In conclusion, types of advertising could be better guides to consumers who shop rarely or usually. I would also
consider my support to advertisement companies that update individuals to get more ideas about all product's
features Change noun form
product
availability
in the country.Replace the word
available
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