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The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the mean values of
highest
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 temperatures ever recorded for three different Australian cities with respect to
year
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the year
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 2016.
Overall
, the trends for
Melbourne
 and
Perth
 towns are similar. They tended to decrease during the first half of the
year
,
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 and
then
 grew for the next 6 months which happened around August until December 2016.
However
, the pattern for Darwin
city
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 is a little bit different. The trend for it was quite stagnant
accross
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across
 the
year
. For more
detail
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 information, the maximum
temperature
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temperatures
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 for both
Melbourne
 and
Perth
 cities in 2016 were not significantly different to each other based on the data. The former highest temperature was around 26
degree
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degrees
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celcius
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celsius
,
while
 the latter one was approximately 27.5
degree
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degrees
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celcius
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celsius
. One of the most interesting
feature
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 from the bar chart is that both of the maximum temperatures for two
Melbourne
 and
Perth
 cities were happening in the same month which was in January 2016.
In addition
 to that, the lowest
temperature
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temperatures
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 for
Melbourne
 and
Perth
 towns were
also
 happening
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in
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on
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 the same month in 2016 which accounts
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for around
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around
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 14 and 18
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degrees
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degree
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degrees
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celcius
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celsius
 respectively.
The similar
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 numbers were
also
 found in nearby months,
such
 as May, July, and August.
However
, these cold temperatures only remained for several months because they would start to rise again
in
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at
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 the end of the
year
, the clearest ones were
on
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in
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 October, November, and December.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, melbourne, perth with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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