The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the mean values of

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temperatures ever recorded for three different Australian cities with respect to

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the year

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2016.

Overall

, the trends for

Melbourne

and

Perth

towns are similar. They tended to decrease during the first half of the

year

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and

then

grew for the next 6 months which happened around August until December 2016.

However

, the pattern for Darwin

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is a little bit different. The trend for it was quite stagnant

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across

the

year

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information, the maximum

temperature

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temperatures

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for both

Melbourne

and

Perth

cities in 2016 were not significantly different to each other based on the data. The former highest temperature was around 26

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while

the latter one was approximately 27.5

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. One of the most interesting

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from the bar chart is that both of the maximum temperatures for two

Melbourne

and

Perth

cities were happening in the same month which was in January 2016.

In addition

to that, the lowest

temperature

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for

Melbourne

and

Perth

towns were

also

happening

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on

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the same month in 2016 which accounts

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around

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14 and 18

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degree

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celcius

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celsius

respectively.

The similar

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numbers were

also

found in nearby months,

such

as May, July, and August.

However

, these cold temperatures only remained for several months because they would start to rise again

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the end of the

year

, the clearest ones were

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October, November, and December.