The bar charts show household expenditure across four main areas in the UK, Australia and Japan in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts show household expenditure across four main areas in the UK, Australia and Japan in 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts depict the
expenditure
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of families in the
UK
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, Australia, and
Japan
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on
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four main categories in 2013. It is evident that housing and healthcare constitute the largest proportion of total
expenditure
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in all countries, except for the
UK
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. The cost of
food
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and
transportation
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,
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, accounts for less than 20% of total spending in all three countries. More than 20% of the total budget is allocated to housing in all three countries, with
Japan
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leading at approximately 27%. Healthcare
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represents a significant portion of the
expenditure
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in Australia and
Japan
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, accounting for around 22% and 20% respectively.
In contrast
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, healthcare costs in the
UK
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represent nearly 8% of the total budget. The
expenditure
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on
food
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and
transportation
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ranges from approximately 11% to 20%.
UK
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families spend the most on
food
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, approximately 18% of their budget,
while
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Australian families spend the least, nearly 13% of their total
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. In Australia and
Japan
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, more is spent on
transportation
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than on
food
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.
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, in the
UK
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, the total
expenditure
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on
food
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and
transportation
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is equal, both at around 18% .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure, uk, japan, food, transportation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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