The bar chart below shows the average monthly maximum temperatures for three Australian cities in the year 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The assigned bar chart
elucidate
the monthly Change the verb form
elucidates
temperature
of minimum and maximum by Australian cities
in the year
2016. These three cities
are Melbourne
, Darwin
and Perth
.
It is evident from bar
chart that the Correct article usage
the bar
most
highest Change the adjective
apply
temperature
was seen in Darwin
in the month
of November it
was 33.3% Correct pronoun usage
apply
and
at the beginning of Jan to April it was slightly Correct word choice
apply
upsurge
at Wrong verb form
upsurged
the
degree Celsius of 32.7% and from May it's remain Correct article usage
a
was
down the mid of Unnecessary verb
apply
year
the months of June and July it were constant approximately 30.6 to 30.5%. afterthat
, rapid growth in Correct your spelling
after that
bar
graph from August to December.
Probing ahead, Correct article usage
the bar
Melbourne
and Perth
were same
pattern Change the article
the same
follow
in the Change the form of the verb
followed
year
of 2016. Melbourne
had no changed
in Frist two months Change the form of the verb
change
of
Jan and Feb Change preposition
apply
whereas
March to July gradually decreased at the
Correct article usage
a
temperature
of 13.4%. Noticably
in the Correct your spelling
Noticeably
month
of June, July and August
all three Add a comma
August,
cities
were same
Change the article
the same
temperature
in Darwin
and Perth
it
was (about 30.6, 30.5 to 31.3% and 19.2, 18.8 to 19% respectively). Eventually, in the initial Correct pronoun usage
apply
months
both two provinces Add a comma
months,
were
Verb problem
had
downward
trend saw till the Correct article usage
a downward
month
of July after it was
gradually increased in December Unnecessary verb
apply
month
.
Overall
, In Melbourne
erratic pattern was Add a comma
Melbourne,
saw
and Wrong verb form
seen
Add an article
the most
most
highest Change the adjective
apply
temperature
was in the month
of November as compared to other
two Correct article usage
the other
cities
. Meanwhile, Darwin
and Perth
were
Verb problem
had
same
pattern Change the article
the same
followed it
was downward and upward trend in the Wrong verb form
following
year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words temperature, cities, year, melbourne, darwin, perth, month with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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