The table below shows percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in China in 2000, 2005, 2010.

The table below shows percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in China in 2000, 2005, 2010.
The table gives information about the ratings given by students for some aspects of university in China in 2000, 2005, and 2010.
Overall
, the Print Resources got the highest ratings
in contrast
with
Range
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the Range
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of modules offered. Technical quality peaked at 69 points in 2010 even though is a small increase there is 6
pointsup
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points
points up
from 63 to 69 in 2000 and 2005.
Although
the Print Resources decreased by 1 vote from 2005 to 2010 from 89 become 88
but
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apply
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there is a rise between 2000 and 2005 from 87 to 89. There
is
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was
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a significant surge in Electronic Resources from 2000 until 2010 they got the top at 80 rate and the low at 45 .
However
, the Range of modules offered declined, from 32 to 27 and
last
,
Building
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the Building
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/teaching facilities apply is still the same value
remain
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remaining
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at 77 good
point
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points
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for the ratings in the three years present in the index above.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • student satisfaction
  • university experience
  • surveys
  • facilities
  • policies
  • cultural factors
  • economic factors
  • expectations
  • perceptions
  • reputation
  • improvement
  • significant increase/decrease
  • influenced
  • aspects
  • ratings
  • trends
  • comparison
  • speculation
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