The table below shows percentage of students giving good ratings for different aspects of a university in China in 2000, 2005, 2010.
The table gives information about the ratings given by students for some aspects of university in China in 2000, 2005, and 2010.
Overall
, the Print Resources got the highest ratings Linking Words
in contrast
with Linking Words
Range
of modules offered.
Technical quality peaked at 69 points in 2010 even though is a small increase there is 6 Correct article usage
the Range
pointsup
from 63 to 69 in 2000 and 2005. Correct your spelling
points
points up
Although
the Print Resources decreased by 1 vote from 2005 to 2010 from 89 become 88 Linking Words
but
there is a rise between 2000 and 2005 from 87 to 89.
There Correct word choice
apply
is
a significant surge in Electronic Resources from 2000 until 2010 they got the top at 80 rate and the low at 45 . Wrong verb form
was
However
, the Range of modules offered declined, from 32 to 27 and Linking Words
last
, Linking Words
Building
/teaching facilities apply is still the same value Correct article usage
the Building
remain
at 77 good Wrong verb form
remaining
point
for the ratings in the three years present in the index above.Change to a plural noun
points
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