Information technology enable many people to do their chores outside their workplace (e.g at home or while travelling) do the benefits outweigh the disadvantages

Now a days
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information
technology
is playing a vital role in human life across the world and it leads
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important role in the development of
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globally but
every thing
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is having their own pros and cons which
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will explain
further
how
technology
is helpful and
also
it has a negative
concequences
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consequences
consequence
as well.
Firstly
,
Technology
is very important to all individuals these days and there is no doubt
about
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sources of
technology
rapidly increasing day by day. without electricity , internet life is incomplete .
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During
pandemic
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students
used
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to their classes online
therefore
it does not
effect
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on
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their studies easily pupil
completed
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their
course
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successfully. Without
computer
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computers
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,
internet
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the internet
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or
technology
which
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was not possible. Through
television
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all humans are aware
what
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is happening all over the world. On
other
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hand , As
i
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mentioned earlier , each thing
is having their
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own drawback whether it is
a
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technology
or any other
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. these days adults are more active on
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internet
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or else they are busy
in
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playing games
in
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mobile ,
watching
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TV
so they do not have enough time to spend with their family which can be a cause of conflict among family members as they are
quiet
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busy
in
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technology
.
In addition
like our grandparents feel isolated in
this
scenerio
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scenario
. In conclusion ,
i
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emphasize without
techology
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technology
life is incomplete . All office employees and household wives
depends
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on
techology
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technology
. I believe that the only disadvantage of
this
is spending too much
of
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time on it and
this
can be controlled by changing our habits.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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