The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The pie charts below illustrate the world’s

forest

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and timber in five different regions.

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, the majority of forest is found in

Africa

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and North

America

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whereas

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the least is found in Europe. Timber is mostly located in North and South

America

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but

barely

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present in

Africa

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. Looking at the chart on the left in more detail, the highest percentage of the world’s forest is in

Africa

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, 27%.

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is closely followed by North

America

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, where a quarter of the woodlands is located, a figure of 25%. The figures for South

America

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, Asia and Europe are all relatively the same, the numbers respectively being 16, 14 and 18. Looking at the chart on the right, more than a quarter of the world’s timber is in North

America

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, a statistic of 30%.

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is closely followed by South

America

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%, Europe,

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at 20

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% and Asia at 18. Less than a third of

this

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material is found in

Africa

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when compared to the Northern region of

America

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, the number being 9%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words africa, america with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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