The given bar chart illustrate the proportions of divorce in two European countries (Finland, Sweden) from 2011 to 2015. These values are measured in percentages.

The given bar chart illustrate the proportions of divorce in two European countries

(Finland, Sweden) from 2011 to 2015. These values are measured in percentages.
The bar graph represents the percentages of
divorce
in
Finland
and
Sweden
from 2011 to 2015.
Overall
, the proportion of
divorce
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in
Finland
saw a slight increase
while
the
divorce
rate
in
Sweden
demonstrated a minor decrease after the period of five years. In 2011 around 36% of the marriages ended in
Finland
before falling to about a third in 2012.
This
climbed gradually to just over %40 over the next two years and
then
stayed relatively constant at
this
level in 2015, demonstrating a higher
divorce
rate
than
Sweden
's value first time
at the end
of the period. The proportion of Swedish
divorce
rate
was approximately 45%
in
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the beginning of the period and
then
increased nearly
a
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half of the marriages after a year. In 2012 the proportion gap between
Sweden
's and
Finland
's value was almost 20% which was the highest.
Sweden
's
divorce
rate
declined moderately to just below 40% over the three years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words divorce, finland, sweden, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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