You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back

Dear Annie, I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I
forget
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forgot
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my
coat
at your place when I visited
last
weekend. I remember when I was
your
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at your
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place I
wear
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wore
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my
coat
at that time It is a long
coat
which is in black leather with fur on the
coller
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collar
. It has two big pockets at the front with
zip
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a zip
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and
label
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with
brand
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the brand
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name on it. On
left
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side of the
coat
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coat,
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there is a flower print. I remember I left my
coat
in your powder room when
i
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I
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went to your room for
fresh
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a fresh
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up. I placed my small wallet in the right side pocket which has my credit card, driving licence and $200. As I am
buzy
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busy
this
week
so
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apply
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I cannot visit your home to collect it. You can
sent
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send
be sent
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it
through
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by
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parcel actually I really need
this
because I
has
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have
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meeting
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a meeting
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in
coming
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the coming
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days.
Keeo
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Keep
in touch Chris
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Task Response
Ensure all key points of the prompt are adequately covered in the response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Pay attention to the structure of the letter including proper paragraphing and clear organization of ideas.
Tone
Work on using a suitable formal tone throughout the letter appropriate for the context.
Grammar/Spelling
Avoid spelling and punctuation errors for a clearer and more professional presentation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • appreciation
  • accidentally
  • distinctive features
  • fabric
  • inner/outer pockets
  • courier service
  • parcels
  • reimburse
  • inconvenience
  • affectionately
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