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The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the
subway
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 systems in six cities: London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles based on the date opened,
kilometers
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 of
route
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, and
passengers
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 per
year
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 (in millions).
Overall
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, it is evident from the table that the earlier the cities construct the underground railways, the longer
kilometers
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 of the
route
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 they reach, except for the
number
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 of
passengers
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 which Tokyo accommodates the most users.
To begin
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, as the oldest underground railway, built in 1863, the London
subway
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 travels the longest distance at 394
kilometers
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 of
route
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.
However
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, it gains only 775 million users per
year
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 behind the other two constructed after it. Meanwhile, the Paris
subway
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, which opened in 1900, has a higher
number
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 of
passengers
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 than London’s, totaling 1191.
In contrast
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, the Tokyo
subway
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 gains the highest
number
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 of
passengers
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 amounting to 1927 even though it was established after London’s and Paris’s. In the meantime, other subways: Washington DC’s, Kyoto’s, and Los Angeles’s are the newest constructed in 1976, 1991, and 2001, respectively. Washington DC
subway
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 encompasses 126
kilometers
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 of
route
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 and carries 144 million
passengers
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 per
year
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. Los Angeles follows behind Washinton DC in terms of both
kilometers
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 of
route
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 at 11 and the
number
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 of
passengers
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 at 50 million users per
year
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. Kyoto,
on the other hand
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, reaches the shortest distance at 11
kilometers
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 of
route
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 and is utilized by the smallest
number
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 of
passengers
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 per
year
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 at 45.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words subway, kilometers, route, passengers, year, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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