The charts below show the main methods of transportation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009
The pie charts illustrate the
principle
segments of transportation for each individual travelling to one university for work or study between 2004 and 2009
Correct your spelling
principal
Overall
, It is clear that
, at the beginning of the period, Car
and Fix the agreement mistake
Cars
bus
were the most considerable segments, Fix the agreement mistake
buses
while
train
was the Add an article
the train
a train
least
segment. Correct your spelling
last
Subsequently
, at the end
of the interval bus
became the largest number and the lowest sources were walking and train.
The bus comprised 33% in the first year and Fix the agreement mistake
buses
this
showed a significant increased
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increase
13
% to 46% in 2009. Change preposition
of 13
Likewise
, in 2004 travelled by car 23
% which Change preposition
by 23
sharp
declined to 28% 5 years later.
With regard to the remaining segments, there was an Change the word
sharply
approximate
1% Change the word
approximately
improved
in train travellingReplace the word
improvement
5
%. Change preposition
by 5
On the other hand
, walking slightly grew from 4% to 6%Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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