The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010 and 2015. (the piano was over 10% in 2005, over 20% in 2010, about 35% in 2015; the guitar was over 10% in 2005, about 18% in 2010, 40% in 2015; the drums was about 5% in 1005, about 4% in 2010, about 10% in 2015; the violin was 10% in 2005, 9% in 2010, 5% in 2015)
The provided bar chart illustrates the changes in the
percentage
of students
learning four distinct musical instruments
over a 10-year period
, spanning from 2005 to 2015.
In general, it is evident that there was an overall
increase in the attention given to these instruments
, with Piano
and Guitar
emerging as the two most popular choices.
Commencing with an initial mutual percentage
slightly exceeding one-tenth of the total, both the guitar
and piano
experienced a steady rise in popularity among students
, culminating in a fourfold increase by the end of 2015. Notably, the data for guitar
students
surpassed that of piano
students
by approximately 5%, marking a shift in their relative positions compared to a decade earlier.
Despite an upward trend, the drums' percentage
remained below half of those studying the violin, with slight positive changes observed during the 2010-2015 period
. Unlike the other three instruments
, the violin experienced a gradual decline in interest among school children over the specified period
.
In conclusion, the bar chart highlights an increasing trend in the popularity of musical instruments
among students
, notably with the piano
and guitar
taking the lead. The drums showed positive changes, albeit with a lower overall
percentage
, while
the violin witnessed a declining interest among school children over the 10-year period
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