The map presents us the modify of seaside resort Templeton that happened period between 1990 and 2005.
The map
depict
the constructions of Templeton Change the verb form
depicts
resort
in 1990 and 2005. Capitalize word
Resort
Overall
, it saw several changes that occured
in the period of time Correct your spelling
occurred
occur
such
as factory
and Fix the agreement mistake
factories
supermarket
have been added.
Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
To begin
with, in 2005 Ferry Harbour have been
constructed on the bottom of the Wrong verb form
was
resort
as well as
a railway connects
to the railway station from the west side to the east side of the Wrong verb form
connecting
resort
. The building near the station have
been removed and the factory Change the verb form
has
have
constructed. On the bottom left several buildings Wrong verb form
has been
have been
developed Wrong verb form
were
to
a supermarket in 2005. Change preposition
into
However
, four buildings have built
on the top of the supermarket.Add a missing verb
been built
in addition
. Two vary
apartments and one small apartment have been added on the north of the Replace the word
various
resort
. However
, school
and Fix the agreement mistake
schools
hospital
have been left developed.Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words resort with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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