Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email 1. Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university 2. Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation 3. Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

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Dear Jee, I hope
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email finds you well. I am writing about your offered ‘’App Development Course”. I am very happy
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your
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selected at
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University
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of Peradeniya. We will discuss the above course details and accommodation.
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Congratulations! I am living at Peradeniya
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, Kandy. I
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studied at
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of Peradeniya in 2017. I know your location.
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very long. So, you can request
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a mail to
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the dean
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office. I will recommend that. I think if you get accommodation, you can continue your course very
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. Because these days it
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problem and
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high rent. That must
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. Most of the students
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consider
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it.
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, after finishing the above process. We can not do anything. Most of the students missed it. But we do not
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. Because we were sending name list and accommodation list to head office. And fill
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form very carefully. Will give the correct details. You send the email before the closing date. Do not should delay. After finishing that let me know. Yours faithfully, Mathu.P
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to clearly structure your email with an introduction, detailed body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Organize ideas logically and use appropriate connectors to transition between points for enhanced coherence.
task achievement
It's essential to fully address all parts of the task. Provide a more in-depth description of your own living experiences, more comprehensive advice about accommodation search, and clearer warnings about potential mistakes. Expand on each point to ensure a complete response to the prompt.

Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dormitories
  • rental agreements
  • house-hunting
  • budgeting
  • commute
  • utilities
  • security deposit
  • lease
  • proximity
  • amenities
  • landlord
  • tenant rights
  • real estate agent
  • furnished/unfurnished
  • flatmates
  • on-campus/off-campus living
  • viewings
  • public transportation
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