You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the participation of children is selected leisure activities in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph indicates the level of
participation
in various leisure activities
between Australian boys
and girls
aged 5 to 14 years old. It shows what percentage of each group have
enjoyed these Correct subject-verb agreement
has
activities
, and shows which activities
are more popular by gender.
In general, the boys
in this
age group engage in a higher number of included leisure activities
than the girls
, with higher participation
levels in all activities
except art
and Fix the agreement mistake
arts
craft
.
As we can see, watching TV and videos is the most popular activity for children in Fix the agreement mistake
crafts
this
age group with 100% of the boys
and girls
surveyed having been involved. The least popular activity overall
is skateboarding/roller-blading, as it saw the lowest overall
participation
rate amongst the boys
and girls
, at around 38% and 28% respectively.
The boys
show a preference for electronic games, which were enjoyed by 80% of them, and outdoor activities
, such
as bike riding, which
70% of all Change preposition
in which
boys
surveyed had participated in
. They were less interested in arts and crafts. The Change preposition
apply
girls
on the other hand
took part in bike riding, electronic games, and art
and Fix the agreement mistake
arts
craft
at similar rates, with all at around 60% Fix the agreement mistake
crafts
participation
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Vocabulary: Replace the words participation, activities, boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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