The diagram illustrates the production of ethanol fuel from corn.

The diagram illustrates the production of ethanol fuel from corn.
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The given picture illustrates shows information about the steps and equipment involved in the process of making ethanol fuel from
corn
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. As can be clearly seen from the image, the process has multiple different stages starting from harvesting the
corn
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and ending with the delivery
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. Looking at the picture more closely, one can see that,
firstly
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stage
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,
corn
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is harvested and
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stored in a suitable place to ensure safe storage before it is ready for milling. During the milling
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,
corn
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is crushed into powder and mixed with water.
The next step is
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workers will cook them for four hours.
After
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this
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stage
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is complete, the fermentation comes and lasts for 48 hours to turn
corn
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and water into an alcoholic mixture. After that, the liquid ethanol is separated from the fermented mixture, during which some solid by-products are taken out. That liquid is
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purified within 5 hours to get rid of water for an extraction of pure ethanol, which is
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transferred to fuel storage. Once the final step has been completed being transported to retailers, ready to be sold.
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