The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012.
The bar chart illustrates how many children, divided in gender, played six various sports
such
as Tennis
, Badminton, Cycling, Swimming, Football
and Hockey in a town in England in 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that more boys
participated in four sports activities while
girls
had more participated in two remaining sports. Meanwhile, Football
held so much appeal among boys
whilst girls
were more in favour of swimming. Hockey was at the bottom of both group's list
.
Looking at more detail, in terms of Fix the agreement mistake
lists
football
, the number
of boys
was approximately three times higher than girls
with 60 while
girls
number
was 20. With regards to tennis
, the numbers were closer to each other compared to football
, whereas
50 boys
played tennis
just under 40 girls
played this
sport. Around 35 boys
did cycling, however
one-fifth of this
number
was allocated to girls
. Regarding hockey, the number
of boys
was 15 and the number
of girls
was 5 lower than young men.
On the other hand
, the majority of girls
went swimming. Whereas
50 young women did this
sport, 40 boys
did this
sport. Almost the same trend can be seen in terms of badminton whereas
40 girls
went tennis
court in 2012, and 10 number
lower boys
went to this
place in a given year.Submitted by sr.alizadeh9191 on
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