The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

The table gives information about the workforce in

silk

production,

number

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of each gender and

number

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the number

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of

factories

, in two countries, England and Wales, over a period of 50

years

, starting from 1851

Overall

the total

number

of

employees

decreased over the period,

major

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part of

employees

were women in

silk

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the silk

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industry.

Also

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the

number

of

silk

manufacturing

factories

increased over the 50

years

, despite some fluctuations. In 1851

number

of total

employees

in

silk

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the silk

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industry was in his pick 130.750

employees

which

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76.786 female workers and approximately 54000 male workers,

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number

of manufacturing

factories

in 1851 was at its lowest

272

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.

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in ten

years

number

of

factories

dramatically increased to 761,

while

the total

number

of

employees

experienced a considerable fall of over 20.000 people. Over 40

years

the

number

of

employees

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stable

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decrease and in 1901 was at its lowest approximately 39000, which contained 13375 and 25567 male and female workers respectively.

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the

number

of

silk

factories

experienced a slow down decline over these 40

years

from 761 in 1861 to 623 in 1901