You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company,which took place in a local hotel.in their feedback,participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel,but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter *say what the participants liked about the hotel. *Explain why they were unhappy about the food. *suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to discuss about last
month held the meeting at your hotel
.I am going to give feedback about quality
of the Correct article usage
the quality
hotel
service and about facilities.
Your hotel
service was a
good enough to compare to another Correct article usage
apply
hotel
.The serving
Correct article usage
Serving
food
at right
time without delay is fine.Your Correct article usage
the right
hotel
architecture is well to feel pleasant.The CCTV coverage was nice in your hotel
.The sound system that I used for meeting
is good.I think you are developing your Add an article
the meeting
a meeting
hotel
with the help of robot
.Add an article
a robot
the robot
While the
Correct word choice
The
food
was serving
by the Wrong verb form
served
robot
is
well.I held the meeting at your Wrong verb form
was
hotel
meeting hall is covered by sound
system and Correct article usage
a sound
A/c
facilities are fine.
My company Correct article usage
the A/c
member's
had Change noun form
members
food
at your hotel
having some uncomfortable with their stomach.That meal was served by robot
is fine.But the quality of that Add an article
the robot
a robot
food
is not enough boiled.They were not boiled well.For whiite
meal,they were added calcium to increase the look and colour of the rice.So you have to monitor Correct your spelling
white
chef
robustly by using Correct article usage
the chef
supervisor
,Correct article usage
the supervisor
robot
and Correct article usage
the robot
through
CCTV coverage.
I hope Change preposition
apply
this
letter given
Wrong verb form
gives
a
good idea to develop your Correct pronoun usage
you a
hotel
ratings.
Thanking You,
yours sincerely,Submitted by insighttribez on
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