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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates after completing graduation study from one institution , what
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graduates
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 did.The table gives the information about incentives of these
graduates
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 after five years of
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.
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,it is seen that more than half of
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 worked full time after their course
work
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 from one college.Government sector employees got better salaries than others. In detail,52% of
graduates
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 worked full-time after their study at one university.After study completion,15% of them did part-time jobs 12% of
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 students after university were unemployed.The percentage of full-time postgrad
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 ,who were not known was 8%.5% of them who did part-time jobs
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 postgrad studies. In the table,around 50% of the government sector employees have salaries of more than 100000 $.In freelancing consultancy,40% of
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 earned 75000-99000 $ and 100000$;
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,in private companies, 35% of
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graduates
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 earned 50000-74000 $ after 5 years of
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.The same amount of percentage of
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graduates
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 earned 100000$ from private firms after 5 years of
work
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words anthropology, graduates, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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