The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below compares the original plan of a

museum

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in 1998 and after adjustment in 2008.

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, except for the ticket entrance/exit and the permanent exhibition rooms, the rest parts of the

museum

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changed in 2008.

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the information shown on the map, there were additional fountains and a cafe sitting area in the garden after changes were made in 2008. Compared to 1998, the shop was bigger as the restroom was moved to be beside the cafe.

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, the temporary exhibition room had a larger space after relocating from the side next to the ticket entrance/exit to the garden. What should be particularly mentioned is that there was an extra restaurant near the cafe in the arrangement of 2008.

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, after rearranging the setting of the

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in 2008, the majority of the facilities were enhanced in spaces.

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, the garden

upgraded

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by decorating with fountains and most revisions in the plan happened on one particular side of the

museum

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Vocabulary: Replace the words museum with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rectangular shape
central garden area
symmetrically arranged
expanded galleries
visitor flow management
temporary exhibition space
permanent gallery
visitor facilities
customer service focus
dedicated children's area
expanded restroom facilities
museum gardens
unoccupied outdoor space
shift towards long-term exhibits

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