The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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What is given is an illustration of the processes through which the
cement
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is manufactured and
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how it is utilized in producing concrete in terms of construction aims.
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,
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is made through 4 rather simple stages,
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with a combination of main ingredients and culminating in packaging,
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the production of concrete is much simpler through mixing four main substances.
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production begins when clay and limestone are crushed to make a powder. Before heating to reach a high temperature using a rotating heater,
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powder is passed through a mixer,
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the heated powder is crushed again by a grinder, following which packing the produced
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for consumption.
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the concrete production diagram, it is based on half gravel which contains small stones,
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and other ingredients
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as sand and
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are measured as 25% and 15% respectively. The rest of the combination is water(10%), mixing all these materials in a huge mixer, and concrete is produced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • quarrying
  • crushing
  • mixing
  • grinding
  • kiln
  • clinker
  • gypsum
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • concrete
  • building materials
  • limestone
  • clay
  • fine powder
  • rotating
  • cooling
  • hydration
  • aggregate
  • compression
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