The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2011 and 2021.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below illustrates the popularity of five different
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accounts between 2018 and 2021.
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all five accounts increased over the time period. Cristiano increased the most and accumulated the most followers, whilst The Rock,Kylie and Ariana grew at similar rates. Selena began with the highest amount but was overtaken by Cristiano. Looking at the chart in more detail, Selena had the most influencers in 2018 with a figure of 130 million. Over the three
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rose to 240 million followers. Cristiano started with a number of 110, which tripled over the years to finish at around 320 in 2021, making him the most influential
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. The Rock, Ariana and Kylie all had similar statistics in 2018, with Ariana having slightly more than her counterparts and The Rock having the lowest. These figures were respectively, 70, 90 and 110. Over the course of time, the numbers doubled equally for all three people. In 2021, they had all equal statistics of 250 million influencers.
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