The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The supplied graphs illustrate the average ratio of three types of nutrients exciting in typical meals that
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people and may be unhealthy if eaten too much. These include
sodium
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, saturated fat, and added
sugar
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.
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, it can be seen that dinner meals
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a high percentage of
sodium
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and saturated fat
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added
sugar
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mainly in the
snakes
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snacks
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. In detail, 43% of
sodium
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is taken more during
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dinner followed by saturated fat at 37%
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, added
sugar
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23%. The figure of
sugar
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is doubled in the snakes of 42%
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consumed.
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, the consumption of the two other nutrients does not exceed 21%.
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, breakfast
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the lowest
nutrients
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content
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recorded 16% for saturated fat and added
sugar
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and 14% for
sodium
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.
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the lunch, contain 29% of
sodium
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, 26% of saturated fat and 19% of added
sugar
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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