The chart above provides information about the percentage of the world’s population and the distribution of wealth by region.

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of

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regional population and

wealth

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shares in the world. Units are measured by

percent

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.

Overall

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, a glance at the graph reveals that

north

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America, Europe and rich

Asia-Pacific

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are wealthy regions. Meanwhile, China and other

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Asia-pacific

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Asia-Pacific

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are the most congested spots. It is noticeable to declare that India

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roughly

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equal proportion of people as Europe. In detail, as

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to

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wealth

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, north America is the richest area

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slightly under 35% of world

wealth

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, European region and rich

Asia-Pacific

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have nearly 30% and 25% of

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respectively.

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, all other mentioned

area

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own less than 5% of the

wealth

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. In terms of population, china

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the most crowded region

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approximately 23%

occupants

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and the rich

Asia-Pacific

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has the

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number of residents

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5% inhabitants. In general, it is obvious that wealthy countries tend to have less population.