The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.
The map
illustrate
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illustrates
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the
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how the
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sport
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sports
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court
in
university
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the university
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area has
change
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changed
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from 1990 to the present day.
Overall
, the
sport
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court
layout has been updated to include more tennis and basketball courts,
while
the parking area has been removed. These
change
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allow for more various
activity
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. In 1990, on the left of the map was a
park
with trees and grass
as well as
a car
park
. Which, in present, the
park
has been replaced by a basketball
court
and the car
park
area
are
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transformed
to
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into
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a tennis
court
. On the right side of the map, the cafe and the reception in the
center
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remain the same.
While
the former tennis
court
was
cleare
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cleared
and converted
to
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into
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a fitness centre and the changing room
are
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was
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expended
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expanded
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to gain more space.
Further
development, turning the outdoor pool into an indoor one.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words court, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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