The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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The map

illustrate

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illustrates

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the

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how the

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sport

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sports

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court

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university

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the university

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area has

change

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changed

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from 1990 to the present day.

Overall

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, the

sport

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sports

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court

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layout has been updated to include more tennis and basketball courts,

while

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the parking area has been removed. These

change

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changes

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allow for more various

activity

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activities

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. In 1990, on the left of the map was a

park

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with trees and grass

as well as

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a car

park

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. Which, in present, the

park

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has been replaced by a basketball

court

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and the car

park

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area

are

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has been

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transformed

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a tennis

court

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. On the right side of the map, the cafe and the reception in the

center

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remain the same.

While

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the former tennis

court

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was

cleare

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cleared

and converted

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into

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a fitness centre and the changing room

are

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was

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expended

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expanded

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to gain more space.

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development, turning the outdoor pool into an indoor one.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words court, park with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

141 words

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

it is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

Some believe that charitable organisations should help people no matter where they live. Others argue that charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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