The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurant between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurant between 2003 and 2013. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
people
who eat at fast
food
restaurants in the USA in the years 2003, 2006, and 2013.
Overall
, the share of
people
who eat fast
food
once a
week
and once or twice a month was higher than others.
furthermore
, the proportion of
people
who never ate fast
food
or ate every day was lower than others in all of the 3 years. First of all, the portion of
people
who were eating fast
food
every day or never eating was smaller than 5%,
while
other
people
who ate once a
week
and once or two once a month was around 30% in 2003 and 2013, but in 2006 was lower by 10%.
furthermore
, the percentage of citizens who eat
food
several times a
week
and a few times a year was around 15% in the years 2003 and 2013,
although
in 2006 was increased to 20%. As a whole, the small part of the chart belongs to the
people
who were eating never or every day,
whereas
the large segment of the chart includes the citizens who eat once a
week
and once or twice a month.
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