You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

DEAR SIR OR MADAM, I am writing
this
letter with regard to
live
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in college
accomodation
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accommodation
next year during study in a college. I am looking for
single
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a single
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room with plenty of fresh air and natural light with
proper
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a proper
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ventalisation
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ventilation
system.
Room
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The room
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must have
attached
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an attached
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washroom as I am not willing to share
with
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it with
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anyone.
Moreover
, it
have
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bed
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a bed
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,
side
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a side
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table for
lamp
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a lamp
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,
study
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a study
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table with
chair
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a chair
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and
balcony
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a balcony
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. As I am vegetarian and very
concern
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about my health
so
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apply
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my preference regarding food may be different
then
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other
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others
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. I like to have less oily and medium spicy
meal
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with
atleast
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at least
contain small portion of fresh salad
in
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lunch. Every year students from
differnt
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different
places come by any chance if you cannot meet my requirements as I like to live near
university
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so what are other options with reasonable price. I can
also
get
room
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a room
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with
family
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a family
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house. For
this
, which platform has multiple
option
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where I can search
according to
my need
.
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looking forward
for
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your reply. Kind Regards, Chris
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea or topic and that these are logically ordered throughout the letter. Avoid combining different requests in one paragraph.
task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the task. Providing more details and reasons for your requirements would enhance task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Consider using conjunctions and transition words to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs, thereby enhancing the text's overall cohesion.
task achievement
Be clear and specific in your requests, and provide a short explanation for each to clarify your needs to the reader.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hall of Residence
  • Accommodation requirements
  • Single room
  • Quiet environment
  • Proximity
  • Special requirements
  • Disability access
  • Living conditions
  • Dietary restrictions
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
  • Halal
  • Kosher
  • Allergy-sensitive
  • Alternative arrangements
  • Meal plan
  • Prompt response
  • Introductory sentence
  • Polite
  • Effective study
  • En-suite facilities
  • Recommendations
  • Campus facilities
  • Flexible
  • Consideration
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