You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going to study in a college in the UK next year. You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence. Write a letter to the college. In your letter explain your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask what alternatives are available if they cannot provide what you want You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
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DEAR SIR OR MADAM,
I am writing
this
letter with regard to live
in college Change the verb form
living
accomodation
next year during study in a college.
I am looking for Correct your spelling
accommodation
single
room with plenty of fresh air and natural light with Add an article
a single
proper
Correct article usage
a proper
ventalisation
system. Correct your spelling
ventilation
Room
must have Add an article
The room
A room
attached
washroom as I am not willing to share Correct article usage
an attached
with
anyone. Correct pronoun usage
it with
Moreover
, it have
Change the verb form
has
bed
, Add an article
a bed
the bed
side
table for Correct article usage
a side
lamp
, Add an article
a lamp
study
table with Correct article usage
a study
chair
and Correct article usage
a chair
balcony
.
As I am vegetarian and very Correct article usage
a balcony
concern
about my health Replace the word
concerned
so
my preference regarding food may be different Correct word choice
apply
then
Replace the word
than
other
. I like to have less oily and medium spicy Fix the agreement mistake
others
meal
with Fix the agreement mistake
meals
atleast
contain small portion of fresh salad Correct your spelling
at least
in
lunch.
Every year students from Change preposition
for
differnt
places come by any chance if you cannot meet my requirements as I like to live near Correct your spelling
different
university
so what are other options with reasonable price. I can Add an article
the university
also
get room
with Add an article
a room
family
house. For Add an article
a family
this
, which platform has multiple option
where I can search Change to a plural noun
options
according to
my need.
looking forward Change the punctuation
?
for
your reply.
Kind Regards,
ChrisChange preposition
to
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea or topic and that these are logically ordered throughout the letter. Avoid combining different requests in one paragraph.
task achievement
Make sure to address all parts of the task. Providing more details and reasons for your requirements would enhance task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Consider using conjunctions and transition words to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs, thereby enhancing the text's overall cohesion.
task achievement
Be clear and specific in your requests, and provide a short explanation for each to clarify your needs to the reader.