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The table below shows the average income and divorce rates of different sized families living in England in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average income and divorce rates of different sized families living in England in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given two tables illustrate information about the sum of marriages and divorce cases from 1970 to 2000, and the proportion of Americans' marital
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 in 1970 and 2000 in the USA .
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, the statistics for marriages depict a slight decline,
while
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 the number of divorces remained unchanged over the entire span, and the majority got married in 1970
as well as
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 2000, compared with other statuses. Moving to the details, in 1970 and 1980 the same number of people, which was 2.5
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 got married, and in 1990 and 2000 it decreased by approximately 2.25
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 and 2
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 respectively.
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, there can be seen nearly 1
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 of masses got divorced, which was about half, compared
with
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 the total number of marriages. Turning to the marital
status
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 of
the
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adult Americans, in 1970, 70% of them showed married
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, which was the majority.
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, just over 10% of people never got married in the USA in 1970, and below 10% of them were widowed and divorced
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. On top of that, the same pattern can be seen in 2000 as well.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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